Three Brevities...Writing Samples

So I took 3 of my other Brevities from last year and decided to post them on here just to break up the monotony of the last few posts. "Train Ride", "Winkie", and "Growing Up". "Train Ride" is the only one I really need to do any revision work on. But I think all three would be strong options to send in as writing samples. Would love some feedback. I'm still trying to generate some original work. We'll see how that goes... Click on "read more" to see the examples :)